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Paul Cudenec's avatar

Excellent, once more.

"we find ourselves living by the rules and directions

of a breed of suit and tie tyrants who live to succeed

by rigging the system through predacious deceptions"

Yes. That's why we often feel there is something badly wrong with our society, our world, without necessarily being able to explain why... We are living our whole lives inside an immense lie, scam, racket.

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Red Pill Poet's avatar

Indeedy ... or as I often say — turfing turtles for lies — "it's lies all the way down!".

Trivia: there was one word in the poem I was ambivalent about. The word was "rigging". I had gone back and forth between it and "gaming". Although gaming may have been the ever-so-slightly more accurate word, rigging won out because of its semi-rhyme with "system" and its faint-echo-rhyme with "living".

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Alison H.'s avatar

And you don't get into the game unless they already have something on you to bribe you with. Good old boys love their networks and their pawns sent out on checkerboard floors.

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Red Pill Poet's avatar

I assume that by "bribe" you meant "blackmail", as much if not more.

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Alison H.'s avatar

Yes, I missed the more accurate word there.

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