Your poems are so exquisite that it is rather daunting to write a response. Nevertheless, thank you, especially for using the word cult as that is what it appears to be from my perspective. It is all so illogical and I am too old to wrap my mind around it at 58. I’ve owned quite a lot of poetry books and you are right up there with the best of them. Certainly you are the poet for our current times. Thank you again.
Thanks for the kind words … flattery will get you everywhere.
There is no good reason to find writing a response daunting. I am, after all, just a regular schmuck who happens to have the gift of unflinching perception and a certain facility with language, doing my best to expose and break-down the deceptions that permeate our world. But again, just a regular schmuck.
"It is all so illogical and I am too old to wrap my mind around it at 58". — It is indeed illogical, and illogical by design, given that the goals behind these agendas are, among others, sowing confusion, imbalance and dis-ease, as well as inflicting the twin injuries of humiliation and demoralization.
As far you being "too old to wrap my mind around it at 58", all I can say is hardly! I'm sure we've all known people with minds as sharp as tacks into their nineties; I certainly have. 58 is the new 38.
I always think, “just because we CAN does not mean we SHOUlD when it comes to science. But I think the cat is out of the bag now with gene editing and such and we live in rather dangerous times as a result. I just know I don’t want any part of it.
I now hang out with a lot of dogs and in nature because they make more sense to me. There is no confusion amongst animals or in nature. Everything else really is illogical to me. Much of what society attempts to convince me is “normal” or “acceptable” really doesn’t feel that way. Mutilating children or young people certainly is not “normal”. I don’t think it is simply my opinion. It isn’t ethical. I left sponsored “health” research because I don’t want to be a part of it. I think our science has gone off the rails. I tend to be rather blunt and cannot write it out in the way you can. We could have used our brightest scientific minds to be healthier however, the opposite is true. That is something I cannot fathom. Anyhow, thank you for caring enough to write poetry on the subject. I guess that is the part that bothers me most….a lack of masses of people caring about it. I am rather unpopular at work because I say things like, “Hey! We are literally turning little boys into girls and vice versa on this continent now” and people look at me like I fell out of a tree and change the subject. Animals have more protections than human children…that’s messed up.
What you've given me is a snapshot of sanity. We are kindred spirits as, in a certain sense, are all sane people. Sanity is our commonality.
You're so right about dogs and nature. The double-edged sword of our intelligence/cleverness has been turned on us in the form of advanced weaponized deceptions via behavioural science and brainwashing (See my poem "Enabling the Big Lies and Myths" for a picture of what schooling has become ... perhaps always was; also “Targets” for a vision of marketing mind-control). Nature and other species don't have this problem.
The maiming and sexualization of children is, like all the current/fashionable depravities, "elite" driven. The agenda is, if not Luciferian/satanic, certainly seemingly so.
Science has indeed, been utterly corrupted. The following two quotes say it all: "The problem with following the science is that the science follows the money." and "What you get when you mix science and politics, is politics."
"We could have used our brightest scientific minds to be healthier however, the opposite is true. That is something I cannot fathom." — It is only understandable when you realize that the globalist crimininocracy/glafia/psychopathocracy (call it what you will) is not just anti-human and at war with humanity itself, but arguably, doing all it can to bring about trans-humanism.
I would like to add that we should not refer to the so-called elite as such. I was born into that group, spent most of my life in it and from personal experience know them to be literally criminally insane and psychopathic. They enjoy causing harm to others. I just call them criminally insane a**holes. On court record and off. I do not even know if they have souls anymore.
Which is why I always either use scare quotes when using the term, or write "so-called elites", both being shorthand for the sort of creatures you've described.
You are right. I know it in my heart. I don’t want it to be true. I sound like a child, I know. It is all anti-human, anti-life, anti-productivity….anti-everything I hold dear. I saw a lot of things in US labs I wish I had not seen. Now I know how it has been used against masses of people, including children, and it is very sad. I have moved past the angry/fury stage for the most part and it is simply so sad. I am going to go through your other poems now with a dog at my side, thankfully.
Brilliant! I know I didn't catch everything- but this is a wonder use of language- the rhythm(idk what the technical terms would be )of section 1 and allusions throughout of food and clothing were especially pleasing for me. I am certain I will gain more in a later re-reading. Great work
Thanks! I just re-read the poem. I must admit, I'm impressed with how much I packed into it — I must have been in a trance of concentration, to concentrate so much.
This poem was revised on APRIL 14, 2025.
Your poems are so exquisite that it is rather daunting to write a response. Nevertheless, thank you, especially for using the word cult as that is what it appears to be from my perspective. It is all so illogical and I am too old to wrap my mind around it at 58. I’ve owned quite a lot of poetry books and you are right up there with the best of them. Certainly you are the poet for our current times. Thank you again.
Thanks for the kind words … flattery will get you everywhere.
There is no good reason to find writing a response daunting. I am, after all, just a regular schmuck who happens to have the gift of unflinching perception and a certain facility with language, doing my best to expose and break-down the deceptions that permeate our world. But again, just a regular schmuck.
"It is all so illogical and I am too old to wrap my mind around it at 58". — It is indeed illogical, and illogical by design, given that the goals behind these agendas are, among others, sowing confusion, imbalance and dis-ease, as well as inflicting the twin injuries of humiliation and demoralization.
As far you being "too old to wrap my mind around it at 58", all I can say is hardly! I'm sure we've all known people with minds as sharp as tacks into their nineties; I certainly have. 58 is the new 38.
I always think, “just because we CAN does not mean we SHOUlD when it comes to science. But I think the cat is out of the bag now with gene editing and such and we live in rather dangerous times as a result. I just know I don’t want any part of it.
I now hang out with a lot of dogs and in nature because they make more sense to me. There is no confusion amongst animals or in nature. Everything else really is illogical to me. Much of what society attempts to convince me is “normal” or “acceptable” really doesn’t feel that way. Mutilating children or young people certainly is not “normal”. I don’t think it is simply my opinion. It isn’t ethical. I left sponsored “health” research because I don’t want to be a part of it. I think our science has gone off the rails. I tend to be rather blunt and cannot write it out in the way you can. We could have used our brightest scientific minds to be healthier however, the opposite is true. That is something I cannot fathom. Anyhow, thank you for caring enough to write poetry on the subject. I guess that is the part that bothers me most….a lack of masses of people caring about it. I am rather unpopular at work because I say things like, “Hey! We are literally turning little boys into girls and vice versa on this continent now” and people look at me like I fell out of a tree and change the subject. Animals have more protections than human children…that’s messed up.
What you've given me is a snapshot of sanity. We are kindred spirits as, in a certain sense, are all sane people. Sanity is our commonality.
You're so right about dogs and nature. The double-edged sword of our intelligence/cleverness has been turned on us in the form of advanced weaponized deceptions via behavioural science and brainwashing (See my poem "Enabling the Big Lies and Myths" for a picture of what schooling has become ... perhaps always was; also “Targets” for a vision of marketing mind-control). Nature and other species don't have this problem.
The maiming and sexualization of children is, like all the current/fashionable depravities, "elite" driven. The agenda is, if not Luciferian/satanic, certainly seemingly so.
Science has indeed, been utterly corrupted. The following two quotes say it all: "The problem with following the science is that the science follows the money." and "What you get when you mix science and politics, is politics."
"We could have used our brightest scientific minds to be healthier however, the opposite is true. That is something I cannot fathom." — It is only understandable when you realize that the globalist crimininocracy/glafia/psychopathocracy (call it what you will) is not just anti-human and at war with humanity itself, but arguably, doing all it can to bring about trans-humanism.
I would like to add that we should not refer to the so-called elite as such. I was born into that group, spent most of my life in it and from personal experience know them to be literally criminally insane and psychopathic. They enjoy causing harm to others. I just call them criminally insane a**holes. On court record and off. I do not even know if they have souls anymore.
Which is why I always either use scare quotes when using the term, or write "so-called elites", both being shorthand for the sort of creatures you've described.
Excellent. What a relief. It’s not a group anyone with a soul or wants to keep their soul in tact wants to belong in. I’d rather hang out with dogs.
You are right. I know it in my heart. I don’t want it to be true. I sound like a child, I know. It is all anti-human, anti-life, anti-productivity….anti-everything I hold dear. I saw a lot of things in US labs I wish I had not seen. Now I know how it has been used against masses of people, including children, and it is very sad. I have moved past the angry/fury stage for the most part and it is simply so sad. I am going to go through your other poems now with a dog at my side, thankfully.
Great insight into the fall, and marvelous unfurling of the scroll of word-works, as usual.
I remember a 78 rpm record from when I was four years old...
Three little monkeys sitting on a shelf
sitting and sitting all day--
"See no evil, speak no evil, hear no evil"
is all they say.
Thanks!
In this series of four concept-rich poems, part 2 of this one stands out for me as being exceptionally so.
The amount of slicing dicing and splicing it took and takes to get it right is, in hindsight, quite astounding.
You are a master! Even in a comment section: "slicing and dicing"while referring #2-full of food allusions!!
I'm not sure I'm a master — not sure anyone ever is — but certainly, this poem is rather masterful.
We all do what we can, and this is what I do. Thanks for sharing!
True- matter would imply you're done growing. But you use the English language well😊
Brilliant! I know I didn't catch everything- but this is a wonder use of language- the rhythm(idk what the technical terms would be )of section 1 and allusions throughout of food and clothing were especially pleasing for me. I am certain I will gain more in a later re-reading. Great work
Thanks! I just re-read the poem. I must admit, I'm impressed with how much I packed into it — I must have been in a trance of concentration, to concentrate so much.