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Eloise's avatar

The house of cards must not be allowed to fall!!

Eloise's avatar

Well-penned

The Light's avatar

i LOVE your mix 'n' match rhyming schemes that ALWAYS feel resolved but i don't really know how you're doing it until i examine closely. superb! :-)

Red Pill Poet's avatar

Glad you like it!

I'm not sure how I'm doing it myself, but I've been doing it for decades ... something about practice makes perfect I suppose.

It usually starts with a line (sometimes only a phrase); that's it! There is never any preconceived length, metre or rhyming scheme. It might take four lines; it might take a hundred. I never know what it will take to say what I have say.

Trial and error. Endless revisions. Whatever sounds right. All in-the-flow organic evolution, growth. It's all very mysterious. At some point I arrive at a place where I think the poem is acceptable ... although I always reserve the right to make it better, should the need arise.

The Light's avatar

i write lyrics like that - though i know what i’m doing using an internal rhyme or one across lines or reversing a rhyming scheme or not using one at all, it flows naturally - and i always have definite guidelines to fit the meter in, because lyrics are never written without the music, or they hardly ever match.

peace :-)

Red Pill Poet's avatar

Right! Lyrics have to fit the music (or, less commonly, vice-versa). I have no such restrictions.

The Light's avatar

neither do i, but i like sitting inside the vehicle of melody and rhythm too - luckily, there are a near-infinite number of combinations of those and words too :-)

Peppy Scott's avatar

"You can't say that!"

Red Pill Poet's avatar

And yet we do ... as is our wont.