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Alison H.'s avatar

Very well-penned and I will read this to my group...

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Red Pill Poet's avatar

Thanks!

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Paul Cudenec's avatar

Brilliant.

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Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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Peppy Scott's avatar

I love the phrase 'fastidiously inoffensive', it perfectly describes the lower rung gatekeepers, the ones we all know personally, who seem to mean well as they unwittingly double lock the gate.

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Red Pill Poet's avatar

Ain't that the truth!

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Susan Harley's avatar

This is great, I was thinking about compliance this morning and this poem fits perfectly.

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Red Pill Poet's avatar

Good to hear ... thanks!

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Alison H.'s avatar

Here in WA State USA we are learning this more and more every day as our new overlord, Governor Ferguson, just lately graduated from being a criminal attorney general, flexes his muscles and the demoncrat legislature falls in line. ..

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Red Pill Poet's avatar

I'm sorry, I'm not sure what you're referring to, as I'm not up on WA State politics.

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