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Peppy Scott's avatar

'...the lucid view of the precious few / who'd refused to refuse to notice...'

I love the lilt in that couplet, the only ray of light in such a dark poem. (I'm not sure it's become clear to as many people as we would like to think, by the way. At a poetry reading last night -- definitely a low-level local branch of "Team Rules"!)

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Powerful - so well done.

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